Final School Magazine

After speaking to my friends and teachers I got some feedback on my first draft of my school magazine. I listened to what they had to say and then re-designed/edited both the contents page and the front cover of my school magazine:

This is a screenshot of how the contents page of my school magazine after I recieved some feedback and edited it. Some of the feedback I got suggested that originally it was that the images weren't very well edited or placed on the page, and that the page in general didn't look very interesting-especially as the audience is school children. To change this, I deleted the image of the cashless catering machine and instead used a an image of a pupil using the machine which both looks better and demonstrates how the system works. I also changed the colour of some of the text to make it more interesting to look at. The image of the pupils I originally used didn't really have anything to do with what was on the page/in the mgazine so I created a small sub-heading at the bottom of the page and linked it to the contents of the magazine.

I also recieved feedback on the front cover of my magazine, which included that there was too much green and that the images weren't edited very well. To improve this, I changed the background to white. Aswell as this, I edited the box that the title was in to make it look softer and more aesthetically pleasing for the target audience (school students). I also edited out the background of the image of Millie I used to make it blend in to the magazine better. Another small change I made was making the speech marks around the quoatation red to just add a little more/different colour to the cover.